Monday, February 24, 2014

Exsample papers

Paper 1
How interesting the paper:
this paper had a.  interesting focus point .
How understandable the paper:
 is this paper is really hard to follow and has lot of flaws
How convincing the paper:
I think that the writer of this paper is try to get across his point but try to convey to much
How well-developed and supported the various topic sentences are:
Not at all very vague and off topic at times

Paper 2
How interesting the paper is
Not very interesting has no punch
How understandable the paper is
It is easy to follow there main thesis in the paper
How convincing the paper is
The paper makes it point but does convince me of anything .
How well-developed and supported the various topic sentences are
The topic  are appear and is supported in every paragraph

Paper 3
How interesting the paper is
this paper is the most interesting of the 3 in my option it has a strong topic 
How understandable the paper is
this paper  is very understandable and has the clearest points
How convincing the paper is
it uses the book to support it ideas and convey thought to the reader
How well-developed and supported the various topic sentences are
even thought you may not see it  in every paragraph the topic is still being supported in them

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