Exsample papers

Paper 1

How interesting the paper:

this paper had a.  interesting focus point .

How understandable the paper:

 is this paper is really hard to follow and has lot of flaws

How convincing the paper:

I think that the writer of this paper is try to get across his point but try to convey to much

How well-developed and supported the various topic sentences are:

Not at all very vague and off topic at times

Paper 2

How interesting the paper is

Not very interesting has no punch

How understandable the paper is

It is easy to follow there main thesis in the paper

How convincing the paper is

The paper makes it point but does convince me of anything .

How well-developed and supported the various topic sentences are

The topic  are appear and is supported in every paragraph

Paper 3

How interesting the paper is

this paper is the most interesting of the 3 in my option it has a strong topic 

How understandable the paper is

this paper  is very understandable and has the clearest points

How convincing the paper is

it uses the book to support it ideas and convey thought to the reader

How well-developed and supported the various topic sentences are

even thought you may not see it  in every paragraph the topic is still being supported in them

Obama's State of the Union Address

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                

 In  state of the union  speech this year the president of the united states  the main topic that  Obama focused on  our economy,  school reform , immigration reform climate change ,un employment  health care and  and global affairs he says  "Let's make this a year of action,"  and his present, speech and fact support that he try to tell us that this is what he will do.

http://www.cnn.com/2014/01/28/politics/2014-state-of-the-union/index.html?utm_source=feedburner&utm_medium=feed&utm_campaign=Feed%3A+rss%2Fcnn_allpolitics+(RSS%3A+Politics)

http://www.theguardian.com/world/2014/jan/28/obama-state-of-the-union-address-live

peewee challenge

http://www.advocate.com/politics/2014/01/28/president-obama-makes-jab-putin-sotu

http://redalertpolitics.com/2014/01/29/obamas-state-of-the-union-minimum-wage-challenge-is-rooted-in-the-free-market/ 

Wedsdays Assisgnment

The Question:  Why you are here, what you hope to accomplish with your education, what do you have on your plate outside of school, and what are you passionate about in this world?

My Answer:  The reason that I am currently attending  Chabot College is that I want to figure out what I want to do in life  or want out of life. Currently I don't know what my end goal in will be college will be maybe ill become a nurse , a sculptor , a mechanic , or some thing else only time will tell. But what I hope is for a career or job I can enjoy and be okay with doing my for most of my life . What I have going for me outside of school life is of course work , as of right now I am working nights  as a dishwasher at a restaurant  also work for a personal service company horizon. my passion boil over pretty quickly one minute i want to be a designer , the next a medical assistant. The one thing I am away passionate about is draw and doodling  I don't know what is but life always seem so much  simpler when I draw.